Rate my DTT deck?

Monsters 12

1 Jinzo

3 D-Hero Diamond Dude

2 Cyber Dragon

1 E-Hero Stratos

2 D-Hero Dasher

1 Neo-Spacian Ground Mole

2 fear monger

Spells 24

2 Destiny Draw

1 Dimension Fusion

1 Card Destruction

1 A Feather of the Phoenix

3 Monster Gate

3 Reasoning

1 Magic Stone Excavation

1 Lightning Votex

3 Phoenix Blade

1 Spell Reproduction

2 Reinforcement of the Army

1 Brain Control

1 Heavy Storm

1 Premature Burial

1 Mst

1 Book of Moon

1 monster reborn

Traps 4

1 Torrential tribute

2 wabaku

1 sakuretsu

plz rate out of ten and help me improve it. this is my first time building the theme and i still have to get mostly all of the cards here

Rate my DTT deck?

4/10

mirror forcex1

take out card destruction put in reload

it%26#039;s just wierd, u cant win with just magic and spells because i dont have all the best monsters and spells,

12 monsters : all unorganized u cant just put a jinzo in warrior unless your joey. take out 1 destiny draw, there is nothing good for u to draw. im doing this cause your deck needs help

improve it 7/10