Wednesday, October 28, 2009

Please Rate my report on why I would make a good reporter for my TSA class?

Rate it from 1-10(10 being the highest and 1 being the lowest)



Please Rate my report on why I would make a good reporter for my TSA class?

Your report is excellent; I rate it a 10 with minor corrections. Delete the two words %26quot;to take%26quot; before %26quot;Reporter.%26quot; Find another start for your sentences in the first paragraph (use different words, not %26quot;I....%26quot; %26quot;I....%26quot;). One suggestion, use I in one sentence, then combine or list what you want to do (i.e., I bring the following qualities to this position: first, my enthusiasm; second, my integrity; third, my knowledge; fourth, etc.).



You write well. I am also impressed with you skills and enthusiasm. You have my vote!! Also, make sure you have one or two people proof your reports before you send them out. Good luck.



Please Rate my report on why I would make a good reporter for my TSA class?

I think that%26#039;s pretty darn good. I%26#039;d probably give it an 8.



Please Rate my report on why I would make a good reporter for my TSA class?

Your essay is good to go. I don%26#039;t think I can beat you if I was running against you.



Add in something like %26quot;I will not bend the truth but to only put it in the most exciting way without writing lies.%26quot;



7.5*



Please Rate my report on why I would make a good reporter for my TSA class?

great 8



Please Rate my report on why I would make a good reporter for my TSA class?

I am impressed however in the beginning I feel you are using the word %26quot;I%26quot; too much. Other than that it is great.



I would give it an 8.



Please Rate my report on why I would make a good reporter for my TSA class?

You have a few corrections you need to make. Never write won%26#039;t or haven%26#039;t on your reports. You should always write them out such as will not or have not. You should also reread your first sentence. You have an extra word in there. I forgot what it is since I don%26#039;t have your report right in front of me. You also wrote %26#039;I would make a TSA...%26#039;. Don%26#039;t say I would make, say I will make. I hope this helped. Make sure you get someone to read your paper for you before you turn it in. Also, i%26#039;m pretty sure that your english teacher would love to help. They love doing things like this and it%26#039;s also great brownee points :) I hope this helped. I was a journalism major in school. :) Good Luck!!!!



Please Rate my report on why I would make a good reporter for my TSA class?

Your report is very good for only being in 7th. grade. Like someone else said, you do have an extra word or two in the first sentence (to take), but other than that, you did a really good job. I especially like the sentence about technology. I%26#039;d give you a 9. Hope you become the reporter.



Please Rate my report on why I would make a good reporter for my TSA class?

Pretty good Kidd



Please Rate my report on why I would make a good reporter for my TSA class?

9.5



Please Rate my report on why I would make a good reporter for my TSA class?

You%26#039;re in TSA too! That%26#039;s great!. I%26#039;m with Tennessee TSA. I%26#039;m the President of my chapter and if it were up to me to allow you into your office I would give you my vote! I would give your report an 8.5! Good luck!

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