Please rate this poem 1-100 as harsh as possible and give the most detailed criticism, thanks so muc

Please rate this poem 1-100 as harsh as possible and give the most detailed criticism, thanks so much!?

閳ユ藩on of a Witch閳?br>

All in a haste come a flurry of hits

Like a pile of falling pissed off bricks

The expected eruptions cause explosion

Inventing fear from concrete devotion

With constant tremor inside his head

His panic stirs his conscious dead

As the trembles settle, realizes too late

He閳ユ獨 the earthquake maker, dealt unlucky fate

Lying on the floor in his own disgust

A moment after a clashing thrust

The dizziness drowning out her full intent

There閳ユ獨 nothing left but the smell of resent

Lazily twitching like a thirsty sunfish

Hopeless like a puppy near a vacant dish

He閳ユ獨 eight years old and mom閳ユ獨 enemy

The carpet stain was her last memory

Please rate this poem 1-100 as harsh as possible and give the most detailed criticism, thanks so much!?

Is 1 on the low end of the rating scale or the high end? And for the %26quot;guess my age%26quot;, I take it that is on the 1 - 100 scale also? Son of a Witch is angry with his mother, isn%26#039;t he? I see abuse and death-imagery, and an inability to get past being eight years old.

Please rate this poem 1-100 as harsh as possible and give the most detailed criticism, thanks so much!?

Your flow is good, but ti is hard to understand whaT meaning you are trying to articulate. 50/100

Please rate this poem 1-100 as harsh as possible and give the most detailed criticism, thanks so much!?

It%26#039;s not very good. There%26#039;s no message you%26#039;re trying to convey. It%26#039;s whiney poetry. Sorry. Unscoreable. =)