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See if my poem makes you want to be Christian. I will hypnotize you with my poem. Rate it too.

Jesus Jesus Jesus

I love you a many pieces of mouse

I am coming over to your house

I am saved from Hell

I like the way flowers smell

Hostile sinful world

I trust in His word

I get his love from above

A beautiful dove

Jesus is all I think of

I can%26#039;t get enough

I am blessed with stuff

Jesus picks me up when times are rough

I%26#039;m going to Heaven

Seven seven seven

That%26#039;s Jesus%26#039;s favorite number

Atheists are getting dumber

Higher and higher up in the sky

I%26#039;m never gonna die

I have eternal life

God is alright

Forgive me of my sins

My Heavenly life is yet to begin

I%26#039;m on earth now

I%26#039;m on a search now

But I%26#039;ve already found God

The atheists have not

They deny God

They hate God a lot

One day they will see

God will reject them

But he loves me

I will be looking down

And I won%26#039;t frown

The God rejecters will burn in Hell

It will really smell

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I am horrified of the way these people easily blaspheme God and the Son. What is wrong with you non-believer%26#039;s? What happened in your lives to have turned your hearts black and cold? This is scary! I would not want to meet an atheist in person; I%26#039;d be spooked!

Jehovah God forgive them, for they don%26#039;t know what they are saying. Help these non-believer%26#039;s to believe. Give them love because love they not possess. They don%26#039;t know Love because they don%26#039;t know you. Take Satan away from them, that they may come to know you.

In Jesus name, amen and amen.

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You should enter it in a poetry contest....

:)

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yet another religious fruitcake

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Makes me hate jeebus jeebusjeebusjeebusjeebusjeebusjeebusjeeb...

Thanks

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what is up with the mouse part? and are you really a christian??

- Peace in Christ -

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I found a few flaws, but one in particular. You quote that %26quot;atheists hate god,%26quot; but how can one hate something they do not believe to exist? Anyways, nope, didn%26#039;t do it for me. Better luck next time.

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You think thats really going to convert them when you are putting them down? ......yeah right

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No, it does not. I don%26#039;t based my believes in fear (burn in Hell), abuse (atheists are getting dumber) or you beliefs. Supposedly your religion teaches you to love, forgive and be a better person. Your poem demonstrates the opposite. Do you really believe anyone will be converted like that? Is the foundation of your beliefs so shallow?

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I prefer %26quot;Judith%26quot; by Perfect Circle:

You%26#039;re such an inspiration

for the ways that I will never ever choose to be.

Oh, so many ways for me to show you how your

savior has abandoned you.

F*ck your God, your Lord, your Christ.

He did this, took all you had, and

left you this way still you pray never stray never

taste of the fruit you never thought to question why.

It%26#039;s not like you killed someone.

It%26#039;s not like you drove a spiteful spear into his side.

Pray for one who left you broken down and paralyzed.

He did it all for you.

Oh, so many ways for me to show you how your

dogma has abandoned you.

Pray to your Christ, to your God.

Never taste of the fruit, never stray, never break.

Never choke on the lie, even though he%26#039;s the one

who did this to you, you never thought to question why.

It%26#039;s not like you killed someone.

It%26#039;s not like you drove a hateful spear into his side.

Talk to Jesus Christ as if he knows the reasons why.

He did it all for you.

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Gee .... you are a lousy hypnotist.

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If you ask for my literary opinion...

I think it%26#039;s absurdly inarticulate, and a fifth grader could probably think of a more competent piece of poetry (if I could go so far as to call it that) on the dynamic and workable topic you chose.

Peace.

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lmao!

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nope. still atheist.

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well, it almost made my brain die, and im still unconverted. so, whats your excuse?

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Nope still an atheists and your poem wasn%26#039;t all that! It really smelled bad.

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i think the lord would be pleased

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Ever heard of Freedom of Religion? Stop trying to convert everyone!!!